Today I found out that I had an excessive amount of commas in my latest segment. However, that's ok, because I personally like commas and enjoy their company very much.
Anyway, writing-wise, I have continued work on the introduction. I'm struggling a bit in deciding some minute details in relation to plot continuity and how wild I want to get with tech advances, but other than that things seem to be going swimmingly. Really starting to flesh out Mr. Wells. However, I will still refrain from posting that part up. If you're looking for something to read, take a look at some fresh minor edits of the previous part at http://storywrite.com/story/381384 and give me some more constructive feedback.
Things are going slow at the moment, but don't worry. I'll pick up speed as I go, and I'll have more to put here as well.
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